Rabbit Poetry 4: pill popping; Make Love, Not Warhol; The Sound of an Actual Man

Very pleased to have three poems in the latest issue of Rabbit Poetry.

My poems pill popping, Make Love, Not Warhol and The Sound of an Actual Man appear among the same pages as some poetic giants, including; Jill Jones, Peter Minter, Scott-Patrick Mitchell, Pi.O, and Matthew John Davies.

Hope you can secure a copy, I’m not always happy with poems I’ve had published but I’m really happy with these and can’t wait to read the others.

Failure to Communicate

First draft written last Thursday, 17th May, 2012, no edits apart from the addition of the title this afternoon, as I was typing from my notebook I had the voice of the warden from Cool Hand Luke in my head, don’t ask me why, just a stream of consciousness thing. The photo beneath the poem is by my daughter, one from her Super Moon series, also without edits. Hope you enjoy, and, as always, keen to read your thoughts…

Failure to Communicate

 

Which leads us to now.

…………And somehow.

But never the less.

…………I digress.

The mood has taken

fried eggs and bacon,

coffee black fantastic,

livin’ on the plastic,

until one day we had none,

so I done gone n’ shot some.

I poured some whiskied water

and helped baptise my daughter.

They said “pour some blood upon it,”

but this is not a bloody sonnet.

Super Moon by Sonia Schivella-Jackson

Rose & Thorn: I Want to Build a Cafe

My poem I Want to Build a Café has been published online as part of the Rose & Thorn Journal, Spring 2012 Edition (over there it’s Spring!).

This poem was first drafted in 2005 and has undergone a few minor edits in 2009, 10 & 11. I remember writing the line “wallpapered with savages” and not having a clue as to what it meant. It was only during editing that I realised I meant floor-to-ceiling bookshelves filled with dangerous minds.

Another example of not knowing what I’m writing is a line I wrote in Extra-terrestrial Car Sick Blues, “God sleeps now under artificial cows”. I have since interpreted this line to be a comment on a news item I read years before in which was discussed the recognition of symbols (not Jungian interpretation, merely marketing), the McDonalds arches are now more recognisable around the world than the crucifix.

But, I’ve digressed, hope you can click over to Rose & Thorn and have a read.

 

SpeedPoets Vol. 11.2: The Morning After an Orange-Brown Storm

The big man in Brisban (poetic licence applied), Graham Nunn, has published my poem, The Morning After an Orange-Brown Storm, in SpeedPoets Vol. 11.2.

Every month SpeedPoets delivers bite-sized brilliance, this month especially so with poems from Graham, Stuart Barnes and Ashley Martin.

 

The Morning After an Orange-Brown Storm

 

The sky, a steel blue -

brush strokes of clouds,

filtered greys and silver,

until the golden searchlight

to seek survivors.

 

SpeedPoets Vol. 11.2

Man is Born to Suffer the Madness of Gods

for the fallen, thank you.

 

 

Man is born to suffer the madness of gods;

a crippled death on a bloodied field,

screaming out curses bestrewed with pleas,

defiantly decrying a fate now sealed.

 

An angry sky contains the miasma,

clouds guard whatever heaven might yield,

soldiers too young to have gathered real sin

now bow and confess to be healed.

 

But no hand reaches, no angel heralds,

no great light offers repeal,

the empyrean closed, the body is meat,

the spent pawn merely rots on the field.

 

Body drops on body across the sanguine plain,

still vessels once of life now no more,

the forgotten, the fallen, the dispossessed,

the children of fathers before.

 

Born into the chains of destiny,

where evil men carry no corpse,

a child who once fed on the breast milk of life,

now chokes on a binge of remorse.

 

Driven to the field by absent leaders,

in the name of gods who bear no face,

platoons of innocents stripped from their heads,

spend their lives in falls from grace.

 

Man is born to suffer the madness of gods,

the cruel shadow of time lays its hand,

in too short a moment the soul fades away,

and in a god’s name is now damned.

 

Verity La: Review of Emilie Collyer’s “Your Looking Eyes”

My review of Emilie Collyer‘s Your Looking Eyes has been posted on Verity La.

While you’re there make sure to check out Emilie’s poem What Does It Mean? to which I refer within the review, and that I quietly intend to stylistically steal from one day soon.

Your Looking Eyes - Emilie Collyer

From the Archives: To Qualify for Fatherhood

First drafted on 9 January, 2010 and posted in the 2nd incarnation, 22 June, 2010. Playing on the rhyme pattern and metre of Ginsberg’s “Ballad of the Skeletons” without the McCartney backing; just a bit of fun with a serious ending.

 

To Qualify for Fatherhood

 

In order to make an omelette

you have to break some yolks,

in order to be a comedian

you have to make some jokes,

in order to be a cyclist

you have to spake some spokes,

in order to be a hooker

you have to take some pokes.

 

In order to be a winner

you have to learn to lose,

in order to love democracy

you have to register to choose,

in order to be an alcoholic

you have to love the booze,

in order to be educated

you have to read the news.

 

And yet, in order to be a father,

the kind that’s never there,

you simply stick your dick in where you can

and come before you care.

 

 

 

Found, Flarf, Spam, Poetry?

Below is an exact copy of a spam comment aimed at this blog. I like to flick through the spam before I trash it just to make sure no one was caught by accident.

I found this comment to be poetic in itself, with word flows like “complete against cut married model status” and “everything investigation finding bring voice body”.

And there is a poetic irony that a piece of spam should gain its own post. Now I wonder what spammers this post will call.

 

Found, Flarf, Spam, Poetry?

Largely Everyone, together begin touch combine arrange contrast technique concept tall complete against cut married model status generally head conduct acquire basis bed off way state happen old whose enjoy dress sentence representation hit overall include up quick significant working appointment nurse start supply would exercise will floor derive status firm last she everything investigation finding bring voice body scientific wash food clean plastic item design round bad term can production steal head ring only order note light potential build park try as treatment hall

Image from http://www.stephenbailey.com/tag/spam-poetry/ Copyright owner unknown.

From the Archives: Freefall

Another from the archive. This poem was first drafted on the 24th of July, 2010 and posted on the 2nd incarnation of this blog on the 8th of August, 2010. As usual with my poetry this poem poses questions but offer no answers in print, hopefully it will stimulate answers in the reader…

Freefall

 

I wonder if it’s true -

they say

when facing death

that time slows

and your life

is replayed in

your mind’s I

wonder

what would appear?

What images would

my mind choose?

Would it replay

regrets?

And what end?

A violent collision?

A freefall from a

great height,

wind whistling past

me at 9.8 m/s2,

reaching a

terminal velocity? Or

 

will it be quiet,

my aged organs

merely giving up,

passing their

expiry date?

 

Would images flash

before me

as I lay old

and expired,

struggling for breath?

 

What regrets

would present

to me

if I was to

simply pass

at the end of

my time?

 

abstract flash (1)

While I Sleep

Yesterday’s poem While Everyone Sleeps was first drafted in Narrahbundah in the Australian Capital Territory on the 13th of November, 2011. In the recent sorting of my draft folders I found it sitting next to this poem While I Sleep, first drafted on the 1st of July, 2009, over two years apart yet very similar in tone and theme – I guess there’s no escaping our voice.

I received an acceptance letter for this poem in July 2011 and held it aside waiting for the publication to be released only to find, after receiving my contributor copy, that they’d published another of the poems I’d submitted.

 

While I Sleep

 

Time does not stop while I sleep,

breaths continue to turn the globe,

Europe dances above my head,

and bombs fall on Gaza while I sleep.

 

The gears keep working while I sleep,

machinery keeps crunching,

clouds form and rain drops and skies clear

and seasons pass while I sleep.

 

Books go unread while I sleep,

poems go unanswered,

thoughts wrestle to no end and

die in a dawn ambush while I sleep.

 

My daughters keep growing while I sleep,

possibilities germinate,

where will they go, what will they do,

how can they leave me in my sleep.

 

Tidal movements, and traffic lights, and moon phases,

and whale songs, and bread baking, and coffee brewing,

and street sweepers, and death, and birth, and learning,

and singing, and chasing, and barking, and shouting,

 

and life,

 

life does not wait for me

…………while I sleep.

 

Shepherd Street, Redfern, 25 February,2012 11-37 pm

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